7.11.2012

Differ. Halt. Imagine.

carrion birds descend
   even they approach the dying
   with halting steps
then
tearing
life from the living
starving beaks exposing
your inky words
that bled into my bones
and stained me.

vicariously now - some would say lesser
   (here I beg to differ, for flying is flying)
my eyes catch
a shard of blue
and my fingers brush eternity
I am finally flying in dozens of pieces
each piece still mine.

scattered remnants of consciousness imagine
   a forever flight
but too broken to grasp the concept
I turn
to simpler things.

   like a silver flash still trapped
     barren
     flightless
        and mine.

inventory is taken
then
the missing piece is realized
recognized
hardly recognizable but it is what it is
a heart
a tin man's heart
indigestible but more importantly
never for anyone but you to take
to devour
to mark with blood red ink
then
ensure that it could never fly.

wings beat on
through stifling, wavering heat
vultures have no need for hearts
the world spins on
and I am flying
   but still stained.

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7 comments:

  1. Fantastic... I especially like:

    a tin man's heart
    indigestible but more importantly
    never for anyone but you to take
    to devour
    to mark with blood red ink
    then
    ensure that it could never fly

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  2. I love this line "And I am flying but still stained"
    Great piece

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  3. This is deep, powerful in its imagery. I suppose even vultures have their tasks in life.
    I really enjoyed it all but loved this line:
    'and my fingers brush eternity'
    (To me) This has such a sadness and inevitability in it and yet, it also shows lessons learned, albeit, painful.
    A truly lovely write.

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  4. an epic poem...filled with so much well-worded imagery....very profound and strong

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  5. The way you punctuated and used the prompt words in the title somehow seemed to compliment the stop. pause and difficult journey in this piece..maybe we can still fly even if we are stained..jae

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  6. Flying is flying. This piece is so rich. I would have been satisfied with any stanza.
    Brought to mind Lady Izumi (b. 976):
    Loving you, my heart may shatter into a thousand pieces,
    but not one piece will be lost.

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  7. "Flying is flying...in dozens of pieces", yet acknowledging that the pieces are still yours. I love that the flight carries on regardless of the stains. This is beautiful poetry- feels like a trail, finally reaching home.

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