a sporadic scattering of
stones
beads
pictures
a tuft of fur from a beloved friend
long gone.
the space is small enough to hinder all movement
and momentarily
i am enmeshed in a bit of
soft white yarn.
untagling myself, i shake loose
a bit of plaster
and she looks at me like
i'd committed some seditious crime.
the stigma placed on secrets
and secret keeping
especially from one's parents
causes her trepidation
until i pledge to keep silent
from here to the nether lands.
satisfied, she lets me in entirely.
i tread carefully
here.
in a child's sacred place.
Wonderful writing...
ReplyDeletehinder the tremors
You captured me with this piece. So glad you've joined us at the whirl.
ReplyDeleteExcellent - a coherent and economical use of the wordle words.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the picture you painted here. Lovely use of the wordle words. :-)
ReplyDeleteA great use of this difficult (or at least I thought they were) set of words.
ReplyDeleteSome great imagery with lines like, 'a tuft of fur from a beloved friend' - certainly had my imagination going.
Thanks for a great read.
Great take on the wordle words! You carried us to a place no one else went with these. :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely journey to a hidden place. Your pledge allowed entrance into a child's imagination.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending!
ReplyDeleteI love this! You capture perfectly a child's treasure trove. I particularly like the way you used 'tuft'.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and well done!!
ReplyDeleteGreat work on the wordle. :) And your blog's design / layout is so cute.
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